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 Post subject: Second Circle Romance
PostPosted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 1:28 pm 
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Hello, my name is Jason and I'm a huge Zeppelin fan. I'm glad to be here with fellow Zeppelin fans. Anyways, these are six of my poems, which form a small collection, called Second Circle Romance. If anyone has time I would love feedback. Hope all is well.

1) Heavenly Hypocrisy

To deny someone love is a cruel torture
But in a selfish quest for eternal paradise
Fragile souls have to keep their morals straight
To avoid the wrath of a loving god

So with heavenly hypocrisy
They carve hearts out of chests
And leave them to decay
On the beaches of mortal sin

Beaches where the sand is stained red
And crimson colored waves gently kiss the shore
Where vultures pick at the remains of shattered romance
And the sour fragrance of broken dreams pollutes the air

Far away-
From shattered romance and broken dreams
Fragile souls bathe in heaven’s radiance
Where they drink fine wine, and dance the night away

Far away-
From the pain and suffering caused by discrimination
Fragile souls listen to a holy man
As he makes a toast, to equality

2) Venomous Counterfeit Angels

Daily homicide led to my broken heart suicide
Tortured nights, but no one could see how I felt inside
With my intestines wrapped around your heart, I just couldn't digest your loss
So like a broken dream-
I began to fade away

Cause you told me goodnight, then stabbed me in the back
You told me goodnight, then stabbed me in the back

I've loved counterfeit angels
And had my intestines replaced with rattlesnakes
Painful slithering memories keep me trapped, in your poison embrace

Cause you told me goodnight, then stabbed me in the back
You told me goodnight, then stabbed me in the back

When you cast me out of your heart
You created all the venomous demons I can't exorcise

3) Jade Green Eyes

A carnal pilgrimage
To the kingdom of pleasure
Where morals disappear
Beneath vanity and lust

Jade green eyes
And serpent like thighs
Pulling me in-
Deeper and deeper
Pulling me down-
Into the flames

Angels cry in sorrow-
As our souls descend to the second circle
Among demons and lost souls
I taste your cherry red lips
And we make love

Angels shed tears-
For those lost to sins of the flesh
Angels shed tears-
For those condemned, for crawling from bed to bed
For slithering from lover to lover

Angels wept-
But in the fiery passion of your kiss
We've burned those Sunday Words
And spread the ashes along the path
Of immoral romance

4) Shedding Skin

Her jade green eyes are focused
Like a coiled rattlesnake
Ready to strike its prey

Her cherry red lips are hungry
Like an ancient vampire
Who's slept for centuries
And awakes to hunt once more

Her forked purple tongue
Is strangely sweet and seductive
Flickering in and out, with malevolence
But I don't care

Although each venomous kiss
Brings me closer to the reaper
And each sinful embrace
Brings my soul closer to hell
I don't care

Because being with her
Is like shedding skin
Reincarnated by lust
And born again

Outside of heaven's gates
Our souls are carelessly discarded
Like broken wedding vows

Our hearts tossed aside to decay
Like morals when they're inconvenient

5) No Shame (In a Devil's Kiss)

I'd rather sleep with devils
In seductive red lingerie
Then live by their standards
Conform and obey

I'd rather taste luscious apples
From the tree of desire
Then live my life fearful
Of brimstone and fire

Cause darling your legs open
And heaven's gates close

I'd rather feel carnal pleasures
And be labeled defiant
Then let my soul wither
Forever longing, but silent

Cause darling your legs open
And heaven's gates close

As I stand before heaven's judgment
You can carve my heart out
But paradise is not lost to me

Because what's wrong with passion and ecstasy -
Between consenting adults?

6) Kisses Indicate

I can leave the place where time stops
Just outside of the second circle
I can leave the place where time stops
Heavenly paradise vanishes

Censored screams whispered
They're spectacular with the vernacular of confusion
Kisses indicate the illusion
There's correlations between your lacerations

Watch the sunrise
And fall asleep in loving arms
Cherry kisses at sunset
And wake me from my dreams

Censored screams whispered
They're spectacular with the vernacular of confusion
Kisses indicate the illusion
There's correlations between your lacerations

And they all point towards a beautiful bride
In a gorgeous wedding dress
Whose hands are stained crimson
Because she holds the beating heart
Of a fallen angel


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PostPosted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 10:19 pm 
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 Post subject: Re: Second Circle Romance
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I care about Zeppelin. They are one of my favorite bands. Zeppelin is one of the all time greats.
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 11:08 pm 
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Thirteen Tigers

Walk up to the gate in the ancient wilderness
Seven cobras guard the sacred waterfall
Cross the wooden bridge to the mystic portal
Thirteen tigers guard the passage between realms

Step through the sands of time, to another life
See the threads of destiny, which connect your life
See the threads of fate, which connect us all
See how love can rise like the phoenix
From the ashes of violence and war

Journey through a kingdom of hypocrisy
Past the aristocracy, and the corrupt elegance
Past the theocracy, and the soothing eloquence

Arrive in a town of mysterious lunacy
Where no one has a shadow, or reflection
Where women dance naked, and cry redemption

When the final grain of sand falls from the hourglass
The reaper will laugh at your mea culpa
And your deathbed epiphany, to finally seize the day
For even the reaper cannot stop time
From eventually devouring us all

Mortality is melting away
Like a careless vampire
Who gets caught in the sunrise

The sorcerer is laughing
Cause the sky is falling
Memento Mori
A new day is calling


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 Post subject: Re: Second Circle Romance
PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:35 pm 
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Who are some good contemporary and historical romance authors? My mom is an avid romance reader and loves to try out new authors all the time. For her birthday, I would like to try to find her a lot of books by a good author on ebay. I can check her shelf to make sure she doesn't already have the collection.


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 Post subject: Re: Second Circle Romance
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Awake

As I approach the portal, between consciousness and sleep
I smell the romantic aroma of peach mango scented candles
The sweet fragrance of burning apple cinnamon incense
And intoxicating cherry vanilla perfume, drifting across from the other side

When I crossover into dreams
I hear serpents and scoundrels, speaking in tongues
Sirens singing of carnal delights, for shipwrecked sailors
And a seductive symphony of unconscious desires

I see bright yellow eyes, glowing in the summer moonlight
The reaper and father time playing chess, one of them nearing checkmate
The Phoenix rising from the ashes, of forgotten senses
And vibrant colors of red, orange, blue, pink, and purple

I feel cold hands reaching out from the shadows
Warm breath on the back of my neck, my hairs standing on end
Smooth velvet skin crawling beneath silk sheets
And wet tongues that slither slowly across my chest

At an elegant banquet, I dine on the finest ambrosia
A flavorful assortment of tastes, with sweet spices and marinades
Lobster tails and crab legs, smoked salmon, glazed shrimp, and filet mignon
Cooked vegetables, forbidden fruit, cheesecake with caramel, and white wine

Across the crowded ballroom, and through a maze of forgettable faces
I see a beautiful woman in a black sequined dress
She has soft white skin and long auburn hair
Red fingernails and a radiant smile, behind crimson lipstick

Her eyes are mysterious and mesmerizing
The right one is light blue
And the left one is dark green
Neither seem confined by mortality, or concerned with time

After a few moments she notices my transfixed gaze
And our eyes meet in a moment of unconscious destiny
Then she smiles seductively, and confidently walks towards me
As she approaches, I can smell her intoxicating perfume


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 Post subject: Re: Second Circle Romance
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 Post subject: Re: Second Circle Romance
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 Post subject: Re: Second Circle Romance
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Nine Lives

Sullen eyes, stung by the sunrise
Crestfallen lovers, under ominous skies
We lost our immortality today
Nine lives withered, and faded away

Precious memories of passion and romance
Wrapped in beautifully decorated cocoons
Safe from the bitterness of regret
And from being devoured, by the cruelty of time

Leeches lurking in sultry eyes
They covet intensely, and rarely compromise
I want to hear it crackle, and smell the cinders
Incarnate illusions, behind benevolent smiles

Exiled connoisseur, of forbidden pleasures
Scarlet letters carved in flesh
Exploring ancient catacombs of the unconscious
Searching for past lives and forgotten lovers
Scattered throughout the sands of time

Piecing together fragmented memories
And mysterious dreams, veiled in shadows
Channeling abstract, and elusive sensations
To stimulate senses, no longer aroused
By the narrow spectrum of consciousness

Scavenging the obscure corners
Of the aficionado’s abandoned wasteland
Looking for the path to serenity
Tired legs and weary eyes wishing
To be home in your heart


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 Post subject: Re: Second Circle Romance
PostPosted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 10:00 pm 
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Phantoms

Saw myself reflected in you
Thought I could stop my pain
By being your tourniquet

Tried so hard, to keep our cravings
From carving their way into consciousness
But they severed our serenity
And divorced our love from trust

Denial taught me how to lie
Found clever places
To hide from my shadow
And slip into illusion

Enchanted by envy
And enamored with vanity
Hubris led us to the ocean

Waves of euphoria
Kissed the lonely beaches


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Shedding Schisms

Shedding skin at sunset
I succumb to my subconscious
And sell my soul to stimulate
Sullen and subdued senses

Savoring sensations, as I spiral
Into a sea of self-loathing
Where the severed serpent speaks of
The gold within my shadow

Starving for control, I slither into
The sanctuary of self-reproach
Safe from the sacrifice required
To heal the schisms


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